I look into your loving eyes
showing how much you care
I'd walk with you 'cross the globe
for you, I'd go anywhere.
Your laughter lifts my smile
giggles fill my mind
Thoughts of us forever
never being alone or blind.
Into the star covered sky
we stare for what seems hours
Knowing somewhere our love is written
with such gracious and gifted powers.
A tear falls from your face
and my whole world trembles
Such compassion, overflowing
with true love it resembles.
I believe with all I am
that we are destiny
I see it each time I look at you
and love when you smile at me.
Please don't critique this.
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wow.
A tear falls from your face
and my whole world trembles
Such compassion, overflowing
with true love it resembles.
This line sort of reminded me of someone i love.
It's a very different kind of love because it would be so wrong for us to date each other and yet we are not exactly friends.
But iever way i still love him, or perhaps respect him would be a better word.
Anyway this reminded me of him alot.
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Great poem!
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Awe, this is sucha sweet piece of poetry, excellent emotional and heartfelt.
Congrats on being featured.
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Emotions run deep in your write well done on feature
you deserve it
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You Are Featured!
Ok, you got me! I see so much of my own feelings for my Love within these words, that this is totally and completely in sync with me in such a relatable way! Loved it!
This is Today's Poem's Featured Poem!
Thanks for sharing your heart & keep writing!
~ Tim
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very deep and emotional, it grabs you and pulls you in though it is a lighter type of voice, its strong your style of the poem is very good! keep it up!
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Very emotional poem. Great imagery, taking us into the world shared by the poems lovers. Very well written.
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Beautiful, heart felt, and so sweet! I love the last stanza the most and how you wrote this one. Nice work here bro and keep it up!
Jeremy0826
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thats beautiful
ikinda like it
i perfer death tho
but good tho
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This is beautiful
You have penned a lovely poem her from the heart .
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Good write poet.....truely.!
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Ah, this poem was beautifully sweet. "I look into your loving eyes
showing how much you care" I hope I can get that someday...Anyway I loved the poem. God bless and keep up the excellent work.
-Steve-
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Wow now this is powerful and by far the best poem I have read from you. Amazing Joel! This poem should be published!
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Giggles my favourite thing destiny oh yes I know exactly what you mean although as yet I've not found it but I will
well done this is a fantastic write more please of the same I soo enjoyed it lol
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This is very touching and full of love.
I think it's wonderful and whoever it is written for is very lucky.
Thanks for sharing,
Beautiful,
~Lisa~
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Overrall this is a very emotional read that appeals very close to the feelings of the reader. This is great because the reader can feel the actual emotions of the characters. This is a very pleasant and beautiful write. I do believe the ending could be more. I would give it 4 out of 5. Excellent work and I look forward to your new one's.
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Brillant, just brillant. Very nice. Great job. It expresses the love that almost everyone wants to have. Keep up the good work.
God Bless
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How Sweet.
I love your poem. I think it's lovely the way it is, and expresses the intended emotions well.
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