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Love was in the air.

Missing image

Funny how winter

strikes a chord in my heart

playing keys that pluck

strings of pain...

 

 

And love was in the air,

fluttering in a turmoil

of old songsheet melodies

missing notes of love

the doves couldn't play...

 

 

They flew elsewhere

fanning flames of passion

of new true lovers.

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  • punkgirl4ever01
    November 8
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    I like how you put the piture in this peom because it totally fits it =)...nice poem and readable!


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 29

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    What Beautiful Melancholy...

    It's incredible, how your muse always creates just the right nuance for the prompt! I'm wishing you all the best!!
    Peace, love & hugs,
    Cyn


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 23
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    You haven't lost one bit of your wonderful muse.

    Buddy


  • geckogirl silver member
    October 23
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    me loves this... fits the pic perfectly sweet one


  • Cannonsfire
    October 22
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    I do like this one, it sings a song, sad but truthfully C


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    October 22

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    and this has piece has struck a chord with me too, you have taken the picture prompt and run with it.
    good luck to you
    Slan
    Juls

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