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res. {Heart of Gold}

Rancid sores from burnt flesh
        life forever changed
Heart made of Gold

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 29
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    Wow

    The outer form of the human being is not where the love is seen it is within the heart of that person one must look into to find friendship and piece

    if I were to revise this poem
    after Heart Made of Gold I would write

    The inner person was never rearanged


  • Diminished Capacity gold member
    October 26
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    I'm going to give you until tomorrow night for this entry, if you need longer than that, just let me know.