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Steadfast Shadow

Silence,
like a
trailing little sister...

always hoping
to be included.


A contest entry

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  • nadine.
    November 3

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    wow!

    i like this. the brevity is amazingly done and the take on the prompt is very unique. i love the title and how perfectly it relates to the rest of the poem.

    this poem is very creative and powerful even though it's very short...infact, i actually really enjoyed the brevity here

    great write and good luck in the contest!


  • Ms.Daydream
    October 31
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    Hm, I really like it! Very imaginative.
    Good luck in the contest! =)


  • Nickelspring gold member
    October 22
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    Poignant in brevity! Loved this
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