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Obligations Brang Us Closer Together

He's the love of my life
doing for him as he does for me
it makes life easy
He would do anything or everything
I am unable to do
or if I am in a lot of pain
He never has a problem
or complaint
always with a smile on his face
I am the happyest woman on earth
and I go to any lengths
to make my man happy
The unconditional love we share
supporting each other
in anything we do
Communication is a must
it makes life easyer
for both of us

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Darlene Long

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 26

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    Thank You for Your Entry ~

    I adore the idea of romance like this, pure love where give and take is equally shared Communication is a must I agree You have a small spelling error in the second last line "easyer" - "easier"

    best of luck

  • celadia
    October 26
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    Love the dedication, I feel the same way about my room mate, good luck in the contest.


  • The Drifter
    October 23

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    A sweet explanation of uncontional love is given in your well written poem. You string each each part togeterher like pearls--very nice flow. The key element besides love is communication between you two, how very true. Coomunication is as the waters to a beautiful rose fir if the rose is not water it stops growing and blooming its beautiful blooms. Thank you for sharing.