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Beauty.

Missing image

A baby's breath

on the nape of my neck

sleeping to the rthyme

of my heartbeat.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 29

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    Precious!!

    These were the good ol' days, weren't they?!!? Thank you for sharing your beautiful, maternal nature with all of us. You're still the Irish angel in white, Lady Irealnd. And always will be... Take care!!
    Peace, love & hugs,
    xx Cyn xx


  • Rick Weston silver member
    October 24

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    awe, i do remember with great fondness those days when our babies napped upon my chest.

    lovely work.


    • Lady Ireland gold member
      October 26
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      Thank you so much for you kind comment, i recal those days also.
      Dolores


  • pre... gold member
    October 24

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    instrumentality

    oh, the first line doesn't evaporate but adjusts to a good ending. a delightful nap or bed time story tugged on through dreams, "sleeping to the rhyme of my heartbeat" and with the conducive tone for them to acclimate their little respiratory sound to.

    this has sweetness with wisdom's relishing flavor. left to their own coo, it cries out which some find nonsensical but these attachings have understanding... as feeling more than page of face but scanned chapter of body. and this patience helps digestion of material to be love not bookmarked to burps after put down just to too much air intake almost only like with imagination and that's all.

    lovelier than only prieview,
    carolyn

    • Lady Ireland gold member
      October 26

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      Thank you Carolyn
      I loved your review on this short piece o work.
      Your kind and interesting comment made me smile.
      I appreciate your time to comment.
      Dolores


  • Stickboy gold member
    October 24
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    very beautiful thought best of luck in the contest
    Sean


    • Lady Ireland gold member
      October 26
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      Thank you for kind comment, i appreciate it very muck
      Slán
      Dolores


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 23
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    Soft and beautiful.
    Good to see you here.


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    October 22
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    and this just makes me sigh

    Juls


  • Cannonsfire
    October 22

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    Oh it's nice to see one from you my dearest friend, and this i can totally see you doing...and your gorgeous son added me to his facebook Loves you ma chara slan Chez

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