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Trap in reality

Trap in reality
Not knowing where we belong or why we are even here
We see it as a curse while other see it as a gift
We fight for a place to exist
We fight dfor a place to belong to
Even the ones who act as if they don't wish to exist or to belong
But deep down its not true at all we all crave for something, someone someplace
This craving sensation was never meant for us to truely understand
Our cravings will never be satified until it has consume us whole leaving nothing!

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  • Mizu Shoujo
    October 25

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    Tht is true... it makes us humans seem kinda pitiful to be honest... i liked it a lot!...it seems lke ur outlook on things has changed *smile*


  • Syko Path
    October 23
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    this has great meaning

    i really love it.