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Drowning Mind

in this ocean of life
it's not easy staying afloat
my haunting past chokes me
like an anchor
pulls me under
into the abyss of wondering thoughts
that will not cease
like a riptide
i try so hard to swim against
seems there is no hope
of ever reaching shore
my soul aches and bleeds
as i bathe in this life of salt
what a waste of sunshine
if i can't feel it's warmth
i am to tired
to hold my breath any longer
as i go under once again

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    November 12

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    A personal write Z. Sometimes we can feel like we are never going to get ahead with our futures, but eventually it does happen. Take care of yourself.