Being colour blind I can only imagine this colour in my mind
I ve seen the fruit and what a hoot very tooty fruity
How about you being my honey dew
Id do you .. pictures painted in greenish hue
With a hint of cream Id paint the scene
Keen as an artist portraits the moon
I can taste the colour sweet like no other
Melons falling from heaven
Like a lover Ill discover the colours of you
All done in honey dew
Author notes
well i tried to imagine it as a fruit
A contest entry
- Color My World ...QUICKIE! by Jade.Butterfly.
700 points, ended October 22, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice
why not pen it as a fruit? it just begs for that by name alone doesn't?
i like this dude..very 'tasty' write l.o.l. yeah.. need to get me some honey dew..
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cheers bro honey you want or honey is dew either im sure you have a supply there lol glad it appealed to your taste best of days bro appreciate youre support as always glenno
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I enjoyed this greatly! The internal rhyme is a pleasure to read, as well.
Congrats on the Bronze!
~ Tim
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thank you i appreciate you dropping in and leaving a very nice comment cheers Tim bless ya too
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I can see the honey dew on the wall flavors cast in all the halls you seem to like the fruit in life i see the writing on this Wall well done dear Gleen you said a Honey dew of alot hugs hun always♥
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I love my honey dews hun and they are good for me bless you xo
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Honey dew is an orange based color,but
I'm so glad you went with the fruit here
Because that's exactly what i would went with.
That's why i gave you this color I knew you would pen me
something awesome.
I love the background you used with this too!
It fit the poem rather nicely
Love you!
Amanda
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well hun a honey dew fruit here is light gren with like whitish stripes and they arte yummy like you so hence i ran with that glad it appeases xo
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When I think of Honey Dew
my honey dew list comes to mind
honey do this...honey do that
Lovely write here
you have painted a splendid image
No one would ever guess that you are colour blind
Amazing job
Wish you the best of luck
David
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lol i thort of huney the rent is dew get a job and pay it or youll be black and blue lol cheers to you David
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Honeydew, sweet like my daddy I am. You did a great job describing it as a fruit but with love involved too. This makes me want some honeydew. I love it. Are you really color blind? Just curious. It would be hard to do color poems if you were but you did wonderful.
I love you
Hug,
Sam I Am
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yep im what they call 3rd perception i see most colours but not shades so i just say green or yellow but its lime or cream in you pic you have a nice blue top onwith SAM I AM ON IT JKING I KNOW ITS GREEN LOL BLESS YOU HUNEY hugs backxo
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Daddddddd it's red!!! lol
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really well ill be a monkeys uncle ..and you have lovely blonde hair
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You are a monkey lol. I suppose my name is sammy sue too? lol
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its sammy shannon i think lol
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Yep...Sammy Grace Shannon
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thats souns quite nice anyway i wouldnt dare say sammy sue thats a aunty angel thing lol when she says that i can here you go rrrrrr i git here for that
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Excellent
what a great write. So very creative for the color. Best of luck in the contest
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thanks and good luck to you also cheers glenn
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Glenn, You are absolutely Sweet & Funny !!!
I enjoyed the quick tempo, the imagery and over all flow of the poem.
Color Blind, you still paint the world in a beautiful rainbow of words.
All the best in the contest,
Cheryl
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thanks sweety i have no idea what colour honey dew is so glad you saw something in that lol bless you hope your day is rose coloured xo
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Your color is Honeydew
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