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Be My Master

I like a man who likes to go fast
One who can make it last
Come on baby show me what you got
You say you want me so here's your shot

Lets do it all night long
Lets do the right side of wrong
If you can drive me insane
I'll even moan your name

Move your lips down south
And I'll melt in your mouth
Oh yeah, treat me like dirt
And you'll make me squirt

I'll be your bitch if you be my master
Make me beg harder! Faster!
Spank my ass and pull my hair
Bend me over that computer chair

School girl skirt and pigtail braids
Excuse me teacher may i see my grades?
Or i can ride you nice and slow
Like a cowgirl at the rodeo

Film rolling, 3,2,1, action
We can give others the satisfaction
I can swallow it all wanna see?
Or you can shoot it deep inside me

Now I have one last request
for this is the part I love the best
Hold me close til the morning skies
Yea, bet that came as a surprise!

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  • Owl33
    October 24

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    Still love it!!

    And to think you missed the whole ball game. *LOL* Well I have to admit that I would have too had I been with you! This is super hot!!! And yet you write it with such great talent! I can tell what you are trying to get across but you went a step further then just saying it. You painted a vivid portrait! One that yes is very erotic and sends (very nice) chills down my spine. I love the ending as well! As you know I love to hold all hours of the night. Heck I even know how to hold till after 2pm! <3 you! Talk to you soon I hope!


  • JustANOTHERdave
    October 23
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    dammmmmmmmmmm

    ummmm..very very Nice and so unlike what i am use to from ya...but VERY nice change ...


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    October 22

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    I love your HOT, yummy piece

    ....er....
    that may have come out wrong
    My comp chair has an extra lumbar support
    for more satisfaction...wana see

    Yes Madame, I shall bow to thee
    you can have every inch of me
    better hush now

    Very steamy erotic write with a neat twist in the end
    Bravo
    Thanks so much for sharing
    David

  • Sorrows Angel
    October 22
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    nice. makes for very vivid imagery, great write.