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Let the Dreamers dream (an etheree)

A
dreamer
dreams of what
life may be in
five, ten, fifteen years.
Dreamers know life will show
splendid imagination.
And what we'll find, in dreamers' minds,
is the future of the world confined.
For every future starts with a dreamer.

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  • lovelustre
    November 5
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    Cool!

  • jackflashjess
    November 2

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    Love the idea of this poem, it's simple and to the point. Beautiful imagery, nicely put. Love the dreamers!


  • HereComesTheSun
    October 31
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    very well written and flows off the tongue.
    thanks for entering


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    October 29

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    Beautiful write, I really love the way it flows so well. "Dreamer's know life will show splendid imagination." Great job, and thanks for entering!

  • This was a nicely written piece of work you have written here. I enjoyed reading this. It was good. This was very short but good. Thanks for the read and keep up the good work.


    • CaptainObvious gold member
      October 25
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      Thanks! It's my first attempt at an etheree, so it means a lot to get good feedback on it.

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