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Heart of Gold

Rancid sores from burnt flesh
        life forever changed
Heart made of gold.

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  • poetryality silver member
    October 29

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    The heart is the strongest organ that God molded into the body. If indeed it is made of gold, it is also the one that takes the highest tempature to melt. Your poem speaks volumes. It is funny how much we can express with three simple lines. Excellent and heartfelt (pun intended).

    Always Loving YOU ♥

    Ma


  • fangfreak1016
    October 22
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    this says a lot in just three short lines and is very imagistic.
    i like this a lot, good luck in the contest!


  • Stickboy
    October 22
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    Yes the beauty on the inside is the most beautiful of all... best of luck in the contest
    Sean