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Plum

PLUM
Plums are juicy
Lovely is the fragrance
Ultimate taste
Many enjoy the plums


























Allen Hollandsworth
©10/22/09

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Did for school time preschool word of the day

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  • PrincessOfFire
    October 28

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    You should write childrens book. Im serious. Group your easy to read poems together by subjects. You might not believe this but I've never tasted or ate a plum! Rose


  • condor gold member
    October 24

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    Plums are indeed glorious and the best thing I love about plums is the start of their lives when the plum tree blooms and is showered with all those wonderful blossums. You are very good at these and I enjoy reading how you use the words.


  • serenity silvermoon
    October 23

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    you did this one for me didn't you? out of peaches and plums, plums are my favorite fruit. i haven't had one though in years thanks for sharing keep up the great work


  • Br0kEn WiNgS
    October 22
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    very nice. makes me want a plum.


  • Little Lesley
    October 22
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    This is a very good poem.
    Miss. Snow

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