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Remnants

Of    your    latent,lamenting

Memory

Of    your    languid,lingering

Mystery

Of    your      lying,and laughing

Monologue

Of    your    lustful,your

                                                      lovely...



    You’re

    lightening.



Relics

Of    your      baffled,bewildered

Party

Of    your      bizzare,benevolent

Purgatory

Of    your      brash,and ballistic

Prologue

Of    your      bashful,your

                                                                  blushing...



You’re

beautiful.



Recollections

Of    your    crinkling,collapsing

Deathbed

Of    your    callous,canceled

Destiny

Of      your      chaotic,and cacophonous

Dialogue

Of    your  cynical,your

                                                                  charming...


You're

curious.

                               



Records

Of    your      sneaky,secret

Escape

Of    your      sinful,seductive   

Excuse

Of    your      slippery,and sorrowful

Epilogue

Of    your      spontaneous,your

                                                                              sanguine...


You’re

s t a y i n g.

Author notes

This format of alliteration took a lot of effort but it doesn't mean much to me in the end.

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  • LeavesofAutumn
    February 3
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    wow

    reading this to myself I'm drawn back. You knwo I don't think you see what everyone else sees- its not that bad