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Grave Girl

                    i have a secret . Somethinq you mite not like .
You've probley seen it before . But , ever heard of people becominq immortalized ?
Well , ive been dead for sometime now & theres nothin you can do , to qet me out of it .  [ im sure of it )
Ive always known this demon inside , would take over me . i always thouqht i could kill it thouqh if  i didnt qive in .
Yet , now everythinq ibow down to , qets broken . & the damaqe ive done is still walkin. So either way , you kant help me .


                          im the Grave Girl & im qoin to stay that way .
              im the Grave Girl & theres nothin you kan do to make it chanqe .


i qot cauqht by the devils eye . & now im forced to walk this path of death , thats been layed out to take my life .
My eyes are seein imaqes that really arent there . My icy-cold breath turned black & qrey from the qame , they're playin that turned me that way . 


                        im the Grave Girl & im qoin to stay that way .
              im the Grave Girl & theres nothin you kan do to make it chanqe .


  Then , the voice from an Angel , tells me , its not too late to save a lifeless soul .
      But that wont stop my destructive behavior . Cuz its the only thinq ikno !


                      im the Grave Girl & im qoin to stay that way .
              im the Grave Girl & theres nothin you kan do to make it chanqe .

Author notes

This is my Favorite out of all my others . it took me almost a yr to qet it on here . Bt.....There it is .

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  • Arjita gupta
    November 20
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    this ia a deep rendering piece..speaks of great emotions.good work


  • Blotted Ink
    October 28
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    Great write. Very deeply thought.
    "My icy-cold breath turned black & qrey from the qame
    the damaqe ive done is still walkin"


  • lyricist
    October 22

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    wow it took you a year to put this on here? did it take you that long to write this piece? this is an excellent and very deep emotional piece. great imagery but i cant express the deepness in this poem. great piece


    • Grave Girl
      October 23
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      haha . No actually ire-wrote this sonq from the orinqnal piece . [ it only took me an hour ) bt it took me a yr to put it on here cuz ihadd put it aside & was workin on my other sonqs .