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Ashes of the Phoenix

Who fares to find the Phoenix ere it fly,
Turning to ashes and fire resurrected,
Shall have the veils of twilight for his guest,
And all the falling of an ashen sky.

On lands He shall not know, the splendor lies -
A pharos on some alienated shore, Kutulu forevermore;
Where dreams are send in remoter minds.

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