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Did You See


As you sit

Beneath her tree

Did you she her

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Her hair the color

Of sweet Sakura blossoms

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Her eyes the purest

Of Jade

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Her skin so pale

Like fragile porcelain

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Did you see

Her face

So clouded with death

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Did you see

Her eyes

Slowly closing

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Did you see

Her hair

Spread out like a cloud

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Did you see

As she died

For you

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Did you see

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