You press so hard,
and sometimes it's just not enough.
You press harder,
and realise it's going too far.
And you ask yourself;
When did my skin get so hungry?
It's gone too far,
but you can't stop.
It's gone too far,
and it feels even better.
And you ask yourself;
Why am I not stronger?
You think you've finished,
but you know you're not.
You think you've finished,
but you know it won't stop.
And you ask yourself;
When will it be over?
My first poem...any criticism is welcome!
Comments
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for this begin your first poem this is real good i love it nice work keep it up
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thank you for writing this poem,i could really connect to it.and i am glad i am not alone in what i am going through.email me if you ever need to talk.
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I can really relate to this. Great poem.
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Welcome to AllPoetry!!!
This has a dark shadow looming over it...and has a sadness to it, too...I don't condone cutting, but I understand how you feel during those times...
Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you have lots of fun on this site!
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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