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Blue Devils


The Blue Devil visits once again
it rushes as I wake,
overtaking consciousness,
suspended as if in air
it rears, to leap
and I become a vapor.

Megrims claw inside out
over-turning highs for lows
pleasure to sorrow
I stare off into space
that infinite distance
of insufferability

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 18
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    Nicely done
    Thank you for sharing and for being part of this contest
    All the very best to you!
    ~Heavenly~


  • Wutz Luv
    November 18
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    Very creative.
    Love these lines:
    pleasure to sorrow
    I stare off into space
    that infinite distance
    of insufferability
    Thank you for entering my contest.