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My Heart

Beauty, passion and love with caring.
We all have our hearts to bear.
Its magical with your company.
The world stands still to listen to love.

Thoughts of you through the day.
Your always with me, one way or another.
Whispering in the wind, your voice.
With the sun beating down upon my skin,
Like your soft hands caressing me.
Proximity is irrelevant.
To hold each others hearts within,

My soul moves with your love.

Each beat is for you.
Mind, body and soul.

I cannot deny, what I see is true,

I need you, you make my life whole.

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Thinkng of you.

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  • XxBabiesaurusxX
    November 3

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    YAY!!!

    I like it...i can't believe you express yourself so openly...i don't think that i'll be able to do that...anyways you're a really good poet and you should make more poems ^^


    • attack110
      November 4
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      Thanks

      This may be a little big headed of me to say, but it's true and I consider it to be one of my best features.

      But my open expressions come from a bloke in touch with his feminine side, which segregates me from the rest of the fish in the sea. If communication is the key to any relationship and the majority of men have difficulty expressing their inner feelings, then logically I have the upper hand, in relationships.
      Admit-idly it has warped my view on the topic of love, but lets face it for the better. I don't objectify and express the true meanings of love through romance and a deep soulful connection with another.

      Not bad from a 23 year old, straight bloke eh??

      The exception that proves the rule, A.K.A God's gift. (Haha, im not that bad, but definately something special.)