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Fade


I watched the moon
slowly fade
behind the evening clouds
and all it ushered
was a silhouette
and a painful lingering
knowing
that it hid behind a shroud.

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  • pixiestix gold member
    November 18
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    This is sad Nigel...knowing something we want is there but we can't have it. Out of sight, out of mind is not always the case.

    Good luck in the contest.


    • Nigel
      November 19
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      She hated my entries madam. Do you think running over a heavenly angel would be too much for the Bentley?


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 18
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    Awww this is sad
    Beautifully written but oh, so sad!
    Thank you for sharing your poetry!
    Good luck to you!