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Midnight

Chime

It is Midnight in the forbidden land
The amount of the life greatly expands

Chime

A weaver of a cold, bitter winter breeze
Weaves a mist around the looming trees

Chime

The noises of the forgotten and the lost
Trying to be found in this abyss at all costs

Chime

A young girl dances in a ring of magic
Held capitive in time, how very tragic

Chime

Herds of unknown creatures gallop by
While others fly in the dark night sky

Chime

Aquatic women lure unsuspecting men
Taking them into their watery den's

Chime

An old fraile lady screams in the night
Killing a innocent child without a fight

Chime

Over sized winged reptiles breathe fire
The fate of a greedy selfish man too dire

Chime

People of the earth with unnatural beauty
Protecting this ancient wood is their duty

Chime

Little bearded men of dark coal and sharp metal
They produce anything from swords to kettles

Chime

But as dawn comes and the first light shows
Back to dwellings and homes they must go

Chime

These are the children of the night

Author notes

This is a really bad poem. My prompt was 'Midnight'

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  • Thewordflow
    October 24

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    Love the use of repetition here, and don't ever say your own work is rubbish!

    If you don't believe in yourself how on earth are you going to get others to :/

    But anyway rambling on there :L A really nice write XD

    Good luck and thankyou for entering (: