How is it
That the sky
Knows me
Un-shakable
Knowing
Vast blue
Velvet
Black
Whispering
In harmony
With Sun and
Moon
All the while
The sea
Keeps
Calling me
Home
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Just as the sky changes to accommodate the weather that comes
so too must we adjust to the situations life brings, but in end we both
return back to the source (home) before the "interruption" came ...
Eddy
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Ty
Ty for the comment , I dont think the sky changes or ajusts , but there sure are allot of distractions Lol.
Storm
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Most eXcellent
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Shank's ;}
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This is my random poem of the day and...
I love it. Very simplistic, yet written in a way that I could best describe as breezy. Considering it's about the sky...that makes it work all the better.
I also love how you separated the two brief stanzas describing the colors of the sky at day and night:
Vast blue
Velvet
Black
It emphasizes the contrast when you put so much space between them...
Overall, full applause. VERY good poem.
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TY :)
I'm glad you liked it , it could not have been farther away from what I was actually trying to say at the time lol...such is poetry , Storm
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