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Not This Time...

"Ignorance is your new best friend."

Now, now, Dear just keep on talking.
Drop your words like time bombs
And pray to god someone
Will be around to listen to the explosion.

I've found no heart inside your chest
For it was taken long ago.
Otherwise, we'd be anywhere but here.
There is no saying where its gone
But without it, you can't feel.
You claim to feel a lot of things
And swear that you're sure.
"ITS RIGHT! ITS RIGHT! I KNOW I'M RIGHT!"
And really you're so very wrong.
What nameless face will you be tomorrow?
What story will you have to tell?
You were doing fine at first,
Until you forgot what lies you told
And now, we'll watch you
Back pedal, Stumble, fall
Just know, this time,
I won't be there to catch you.
Not only do you not deserve to be caught
But I can't hold the weight of your lies.

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  • TheAmazingGothGal
    November 24
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    wow, that's like, holy shit.
    this is really really amazing, reading this was like the craziest yet most incredible experience, i felt like finding the ass who hurt me most and ripping his face off


  • sabrina christine
    November 21

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    nice...i think this can relate to everyone....everyone has been lied to, everyone has been hurt....if you havent been hurt then its coming


  • Karsis
    November 14

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    This reminds me of something that happened not too long ago.
    An ex, when I was with her, lied to me constantly.
    I let her build the walls of her own bullshit tempted her back into every dark corner.
    Finally, once I had enough, became apathetic towards her,
    And we broke it off...
    She kept to her bullshit, just as I intended.
    I crawled into those walls of her's.
    I tempted her back into every trap she and I layed.
    I taught her a lesson, learned in the tear-stained pillowcases of her bed.
    Speak truth in all one does, for the lies shall destroy.
    I hate to see a woman cry... this time, I couldn't help but grin with contempt.

    "What nameless face will you be tomorrow?
    What story will you have to tell?"

    When one loses themself, they've lost everything.
    Well done.
    Thank you for bringing back the memory of victory,
    Though gained in contempt, judgement, pure malice, and love.


    ~KSK


  • Simp
    October 24
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    Wow.

  • wow, when you rip into someone you rip into something, i mean really i would hate tto be on your shit list, keep it flowing


  • Anubis
    October 22

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    Gio,

    You are an amazing writer. The last section is truly what the sealed the deal. Expand that a little and I could see them making a song out of this one.

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