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Palms High

As I walk
sand going through my toes
The moon is out
shineing brightly on the waves
at low tide the water crashs down
on the beach
Water spueling
all over the ground
Palms high in the air
and their leaves
fluttering in the breeze

Author notes

Picture prompt 1
Darlene Long

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  • ennovy silver member
    October 26
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    thank you for entering our contest this a very
    nice short poem.....novy & b razos


  • Antipodi
    October 22
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    Now this is real feel poem with lots of sensory verse an excellent read dear poet