You looked straight into me
straight through the lie
that kept me together the whole time we were two hearts combined.
Right through me
with big green mossy eyes,
emerald in many ways detailed and precious taking pictures with every blink you made.
Glaring into my past
seeing the other me
stopping to realise the girl you had picked, was not the girl you had saw first place.
Your eyes
show you the real story
but a first time glance was just not enough for you, you had to look again.
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Woahh! I actually think this is one of the best pieces I have read in a long time
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very amazing.
im prettymuch
speechless.
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Very unique. I actually like this alot. Very well done.
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I really like the vivid way you describe the 'green mossed eyes'. They're all we learn about the owner, but then perhaps all relationships are based around what we read through the eyes anyway
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your color is:
Moss Green&goodluck!
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Thankies :]]
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no problem.
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