Such beauty is the moon held up by the night sky.
Within tonights shadows you will be the one to die.
Snatched into an alley and brutally raped.
An idol female figure in which I dearly hate.
Your screams only please me and your blood now used on the walls as paint.
So scared and broken you are that your innocence is now taint.
No need to scream, because no one will ever hear.
On these streets I am the night walker that those fear.
I love your eyes, your hair, and face.
Something very majestic that I will violently take.
I never knew that for every victim that their blood is a different taste.
Nor how much in the eyes of them from the blade I use to decapitate.
Hush my little darling, your suffering is almost over.
I will start with my signature initial that I carve into your right shoulder.
Through the night air burst a scream of bloody murder.
How unfortunate that not even her own loved ones hadn't heard her.
Blood in its many forms can come in different shades.
Bloody Flesh hanging off of each and every one of my blades.
Scream, cry, curse, getting angry is all part of fear.
But you will soon feel nothing at all my dear.
From your stripped face is a mask I will make.
Then a quick incision across your throat is all that it takes.
How is it no fun if I had not killed her.
A repeated rapist and methodical psychotic killer.
Here in this dark alley is where the world will find your remains.
And as so many others left in fear will await for me to strike again.
I idolize the father of serial murders, Jack the Ripper.
I can promise you all that there is no one as iller.
Dahmer maybe, Lector is very possible.
But I prefer my killings to be less hostile.
Goodnight and sleeptight.
For else out there is someone fighting for their life.
A contest entry
- Dark, Haunting, Poems Please by JeannieD Hunter.
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This was wickedly dark and amazing.
Flowed evnely , and really...crative
is the word for it!
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this is dark
and a really great write
it held me captive to the very end
But i did not find it scary
none the less though you did fabulous.
Thank you
keep the ink flowing
fire
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Good work, not your best work, but it is pretty good work none the less. You've really conceptualized a very brutal tale here. It keeps the readers attention with every couplet. Keep it up.
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whoa
just whoa...this is...whoa
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Brilliant!
shite thats dark and wow!
ust wow its amazing but so
dark, i love it though, amazing!!!
great job and the imagery was
just fantastic, i love it!!!
-penguin-
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