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wonderful.

i hate your face.


it has been two days and three nights since mother looked at me
without pretending
that
i was made of glass. she wants to rub me off from her childish drawings
that she drew as a little girl. she is a little girl
with pouches; ink like blots scattered on both cheeks-- aging age
of no experience.


i hate your lying skin and hands and your hunched
back
your lizardly arrogance and
stature--tail tucked in like no man's immortality.
you resemble my father's youth
and everytime he tries to make me say sorry to mother
he looks more like you.

you pole dance
in the doorway of an oldman's only incisors
and i was sarcastically correct with the faint
wordlessness.
kudos.

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  • heaven all alone
    October 28

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    this is amazing

    best of luck in the competition


    • e s h a.
      October 29
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      i almost forgot about this. thank you. how have you been?