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i look up

AS I LOOK UP
A TEAR ROLS SLOWLY DOWN MY CHEK
I LOK AT THE SKY
AND ASK MYSELF WHY
WHY YOU HAD TO LEAVE ME
ALL ALONE IN THIS COLD ASS WORLD
CANT CLOSE MY EYES AT NIGHT
FEELING ALL THIS GUILT IN SIDE
WISHING THAT I DIDNT HAVE TO SEE YO
GETTING SHOT
NOW IM HERE ALL A LONE
TRYING TO THINK ABOUT BETTER DAYS
AND WONDERING IM MY LIFE IS GOINT TO END  THE SAME

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  • fangfreak1016
    October 22

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    this is clearly a highly emotionally-charged poems, obvious by the all caps it's written in. the content is great and the flow is very nice, the only thing i would watch out for is spelling (unless your misspellings are intentional).


  • readit14
    October 22
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    Amasing

    This really has feeling. most people can't talk or even rite about it. Great job!!! U GOT TALENT !!!!!