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tanning themselves










tanning themselves
crowsnest mountains
winter morn






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  • Draig aine gold member
    November 3
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    congradulations on the gold

    stunning ku, love it


    • Sai Babas Lotus
      November 4

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      Thanks a lot It wasn't so easy writing this one

      Regards,
      Charishma


      • Draig aine gold member
        November 4
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        a fine haiku can take much longer to write then other forms for each world is chosen carefully so few words say so much


  • Haiku Kin
    October 31

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    What an interesting haiku! I enjoyed it. It's funny, thinking about mountains tanning themselves... in winter.

    Thanks for taking the effort for this lovely little haiku. Congratulations on winning gold!


  • Swan song gold member
    October 31
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    they do that! Nicely done


    • Sai Babas Lotus
      October 31
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      Thank you a zillion times for enjoying my haiku so much!! I am overjoyed to see that this has won GOLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-) It was not easy writing this 'ku. I had to do a lot of mind work, lots of thinking and keep a lot of patience until I just got the right set of words. Thanks so much!!! I'm elated you enjoyed this such a lot!! Thank you for the points too.

      Warm regards,
      Charishma

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