tanning themselves
crowsnest mountains
winter morn
A contest entry
- Twinkling haiku by Swan song.
900 points, ended October 31, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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congradulations on the gold
stunning ku, love it

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Thanks a lot
It wasn't so easy writing this one
Regards,
Charishma
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a fine haiku can take much longer to write then other forms for each world is chosen carefully so few words say so much
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What an interesting haiku! I enjoyed it. It's funny, thinking about mountains tanning themselves... in winter.

Thanks for taking the effort for this lovely little haiku. Congratulations on winning gold!

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Thanks for your joyful comment, Haiku Kin! Made my day

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they do that! Nicely done


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Thank you a zillion times for enjoying my haiku so much!! I am overjoyed to see that this has won GOLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-) It was not easy writing this 'ku. I had to do a lot of mind work, lots of thinking and keep a lot of patience until I just got the right set of words. Thanks so much!!! I'm elated you enjoyed this such a lot!! Thank you for the points too.
Warm regards,
Charishma
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