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Back Again

Lids like
Butterfly wings
Flutter open
To greet me.
Tired groan.
Silent smile.
Welcome home.

Author notes

I wrote this for my poetry class. Our assignment was to write an imagist piece.

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  • Nuclear
    October 22
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    I pictured the butterfly wings to be a metaphor for doors.
    Am I right?

    This is simple and pretty; I like it.


    • Jc91
      October 25
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      Actually they're eye lids lolz. But it could work that way. All art is free to interpretation once it's been put out there