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Can't Take It

This is too hard for me,
You say you love me,
True love isn't always so true,
Now is it?
You may say i'm your girl,
But for now on i'm not,
You cheated onvme,
Worst of it all,
My best friend,
What were you thinking,
You dumbass,
You knew that you were my everything,
Couldn't you just keep it in your pants?
Oh wait i forgot that's wrong,
When are you going to learn to keep it there?
I'm done with waiting for you to be the man i wanted,
I'm leaving you and finding another.

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  • awannabepoet
    November 23
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    You tell him!!!!

    Proud of you for not being a welcome matt... there are some there that will treat you right, go get em!


    • ciara12
      November 23
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      thank you i'm glad you see that i am a smart girll <3