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My Dear!



(Based on the poem,"PRIYE" in Hindi by Emani Ganapathi Sarma,India)

Golden thoughts of yester days filled
My mind a lot with your memories distilled

In my private room I muse alone, on you
A new song everyday I send you

When you smile, giggle and fell shy,
Your beauty decorates the moon shine.

No other beauty matches with yours
It excels all other beauties, I say!

Every night I wakeup in search of you, dear
Bloody sleep comes upsetting me , unclear

Ways are unknown to my goal distant
But , my breath gives me hope constant

(From Hindi original ‘PRIYE’ BY Mr. E.G.SHARM

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  • ScarletO gold member
    November 19
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    A beautiful love poem full of emotions of the heart.


  • angelica silver member
    October 22
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    Dear Ceegee, I like this poem very much, I don't know much about the poet you based it on,but it's very lovely.

    Joan