Man you got me down so low
How I let you, I do not know
I couldn't tell you up from down
Due to my head spinning round and round.
You threw me through loops & hoops
Because you knew I wouldn't let you
Do what you wanted to do.
Those drugs you "need"
Are nothing but your inner fiend
Screaming for you to fill the void
That was opened when you were a littl boy
So now you try to play me like a toy.
You stretch me like I'm Stretch Arm Strong
Play me like silly putty
You molded me like play dough
Until today when I am going to say NO.
Enough is enough
And I'm done being handled rough.
Your childhood is gone
I am too
It's time for you to man up boo.
What was your first feeling as you read this?
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"You stretch me like I'm Stretch Arm Strong
Play me like silly putty
You molded me like play dough
Until today when I am going to say NO."
Ok...just to let you know- That line was awesome. This poem had a nice flow, I really enjoyed it
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Thank you!
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Brea..
You remind me of this girl I know, so much. -
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Well well! Hey there stranger! How have you been? It's been wuite a while huh? I do do I? How so? I hope it's in a good way!?
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your feelings flow through stronge within this write i like it, its straight talking, there even apears to be a hint of lyrical flow in it too. i hope these words you penned were also voiced to the culprit. x
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He came on and read it on his own... wasn't too happy, but it needed to be said. Thank you for your support on this and the kind words. They are greatly appreciated.
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Hmmm.....
..... sounds like someone needs lessons on how to treat a lady. I am glad you have the strength to stand up to him and let him know that it is not alright to be that way and I am even happier you have moved him into the past so he may never hurt you again!
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