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[Dusty webs witness] Haiku


Dusty webs witness -
even my spiders
are poor housekeepers!


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  • Nights Aikata
    October 30
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    HA!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 23
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    More of a senryu - I like it.


  • Simply Olivia
    October 23
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    Cute


  • Nickelspring gold member
    October 22
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    My spiders have no good role models around my house!
    Nice Haiku!
    K


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 22
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    I belong to this club, too!


  • Roseamongweeds
    October 22
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    I have spiderwebs, too.

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