still the thinking mind
choppy waves gone from brain pond
still here, just watching
Author notes
Meditation, stilling thinking-mind, judging-mind; stepping back into the divine-mind which just knows and watches with love - expieriencing true peace of mind.
In a list
A contest entry
- help me celebrate my one year anniversary-Far Eastern Poetry Forms by Draig aine.
3250 points, ended November 3, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Begone, oh choppy waves!!!
Well expressed, Bonita.
Interesting play on the use
of still as a verb and an adverb.
Very effective!
M-C
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Thanks, I didn't even realize I had used still twice, that way. Interesting observation. If I had tried to do that, I never could have. - Bonita
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oh boy that is me1 should hang out a sign gone fishing
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