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Right To Your Face

Oh honey of course . I’m .
In love with you, I’m not . lying .
When I say nothing has felt this . right .
Before , sweetheart you know all I want is . to .
Make you smile, nothing is more beautiful than . your .
Eyes shining at me, light streaming from every pore in your . face .

Author notes

um this worked better when I could put the last word of each line in bold but I'm hoping it still gets the point across.
(read the last words independently or it's fail)
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  • HybridOne
    November 9

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    Wow! Heh I didn't see the 'Im Lying Right To Your Face" part untill one of the comments said it. Thats brilliant. How did you figure out how to fit this all around a small bit of writing?
    Brilliant.


  • DarkbladDeathStrike
    November 7
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    :D

    Nice trick, love the way u play wit the poem


  • Behind.These.Eyes
    November 2
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    oh my gosh!! thats great lol!!! "im lying right to ur face" great!! nice i love how u put this together


  • Dark-Moon-Enid
    October 27

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    wow! I read the end lines and I just love how you made something look so good when it's not right. I love this style and keep writing.