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Our Kiss



As I sit in your room on your bed
you come inside and kiss me on my head, then
"let me love you" were the words that you said

So you climb up on top of me
and when your chest touches mine,
I knew it was meant to be
And then Oh... So... Very... Eagerly

I let out a slow low moan
Then out of your soft face comes your soft groan
And OH...

I could tell you needed my touch
You ached to feel the women
that you loved so much

Now you press
Your cheek
To mine
My leg goes around your back
And our hands intertwine

Feeling... So... Divine
We kiss a passionate kiss
A kiss so breath-takingly
And Oh... SO... amazing bliss

That neither of us dare to pull away
And so we stay
Lips locked
In a sensual,
Sexual,
Borderline sinful,
Romance-filled...
Our Kiss

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  • Sonya-Erasmus silver member
    October 23

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    This is such a beautiful and sensual write.
    I love the lines
    'And so we stay
    Lips locked
    In a sensual,
    Sexual,
    Borderline sinful,
    Romance-filled...
    Our Kiss'
    I would end it with 'kiss' and not 'our kiss', but thats just my opinion.
    Thanks so much for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    I don't see who the poem is dedicated to in your AN.
    Kind regards
    Sonya