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Journal entry 29 'Turning'

                                              Journal entry 29               Oct 2009
                                                  ‘Turning’


                                        The sun rises and we say;
                                        “Behold! A new day is born!”

                                        The sun sets and we say;
                                        “Behold! The day is dying!”

                                        But the sun is only turning
                                        To give life to another day!

                                        With the first small cry we say;
                                        “Behold! A child is born!”

                                        With the final breath we say;
                                        “Behold! The child is dying!”

                                        But the soul is only turning
                                        To live yet another day!

                                       

                                       

                                       
     





















Copyright John Scott 2009

Author notes

Nicky, this is for your friend that you spoke of, I hope it is appropriate also it is for you in your time of sadness.
John

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  • nikoshiana
    October 27

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    john

    Thankyou John, this is very beautiful... its so hard to know a good friend is dying.. thankyou for yr kind thoughts and words x


  • Jesann gold member
    October 27

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    This brought a
    Beautiful insight .
    Born, into light, to return to light.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 23

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    OK John your insight is awesome you have so much to say..so deep in thought but with such true logic.. each word should come to mind.. but sometimes we fail to see this picture you have painted in life...beautiful dear one .. thank you for your insight to life hugs always Angel♥


    • humblpye gold member
      October 23
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      We all have our own pictures to paint sometimes they are obscure sometimes we have to adjust our eyes to know that we are sure!
      Your responses are always accurate I admire the way you search between the lines
      Much of my inspiration comes the feedback I receive; we draw from one another all the time
      Thank you
      John


  • drifting cloud silver member
    October 23
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    Nice comparison. Life, spirit continues on.


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    October 22

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    Wonderful! The minute I read it this old song came to mind:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNopQq5lWqQ


    • humblpye gold member
      October 23
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      The minute I read your comment I knew what the song was! This is a fave of mine Pam, I know the Byrds made it big but I have heard Dylan do this but can't trace the albumn...the song was written by Pete Seeger back in 59, recorded in 62 ispired by Ecclesiastes3:1...another 'coincidence' as Ecclesiastes is my favourite book in the Bible, always has been!
      Thanks so much for sharing this my friend!
      J-J


    • humblpye gold member
      October 22
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      Ok i'll check it out in the morning Pinks me ain't too well lately
      Take care
      xxxx xxx


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 22

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    Just a few moments before  I read this lovely poem I was glancing at a picture on my fireplace of my sister inlaw who eight years ago past away or should I say turning to live yet another day, she died on the twenty first of October, 8 years from yesterday, she was seventeen an unexpected death.

     

    I know it sounds silly but as I walked by I said to her picture, its beautiful where you are 

     

    then I read your lovely poem 

     

    this is beautiful John and I believe it is true

     

    thank you for bring another smile

     

     

     

     

    I am sure Nicky will smile as she reads this as well

     

    God bles you my friend...


    • humblpye gold member
      October 22
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      That's a sad lil' story, tugs at my heart, and all these lil' connections...all I can say is God must be omnipresent/omniscient there's no doubt about it; unless of course you believe in cosmic connections, linking hearts and minds...but there again as you have said before; All is One!
      Coincidence...phooey!
      Thank you for sharing your story
      Blessings
      John


  • katie marie silver member
    October 22
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    Fantastic analogy. This would be the perfect words to share with a friend grieving the death of a loved one.


    • humblpye gold member
      October 22
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      Thank you Katie, that is very kind of you,
      please check the Authour notes section
      John


      • katie marie silver member
        October 22

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        I have a couple of friends grieving too. Hope you don't mind if I share your words with them too.

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