love is so confusing,
getting and receiving,
both put u through hell, and back.
The blindness when in love,
only seeing what you want to,
believing what you must.
Not listening to others,
doing what your heart desires
getting yourself into trouble.
Then, the happiness it brings,
holding on to something good,
someone finally who understands you.
love,
something we all want,
but are never prepared for it.
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hey dear. this poem is so true. I really like it
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"Then, the happiness it brings,
holding on to something good,
someone finally who understands you."
Fantastic lines. I want to see more imagery from you, lil sis.
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imagery?? okay i will try, just for you...but i'm more about emotions, as you can tell
<3
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tell me about it
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I love this =]
call me.
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Very insightful write sunshine
it screams the truth. And when we finally fo find it, it's great and wonderful. Loved this one ! I'm so proud of my AP daughter
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You are very wise, and this is so true. We long for love and then we it reaches us, we are so surprised we don't know how to act or how to feel. Do we become romanticists, do we be compassionate, or do we act as if nothing in the world can touch us?
Your poem showed these points brilliantly and I applaud you.
- Caroline
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completely true chelsi...completely true...
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Yes love z there but we are neva prepared 4 it wen it comes. WHY?!?! we will neva know but datz the beauty of it. Life z full of krazy SupriSeS we will neva know wat will come up nxt, even if we are ready for it or not they will always come up.
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