Sea and sand so softly meet
beneath this twilight time
with comfort as the waves wash in
my spirit rests, sublime.
And heaven lights the world with hope
where oft' despair will reign,
with whispers 'pon this gentle sway
in brilliant hued domain.
In faith the spirit dances life
for none shall I exclude,
but proudly hold to those reach out
for all would I include.
Oh sweetest earth to bless this day
with life in colours fine,
that tenderly reach out to all
accept diverse design.
Author notes
I don't join groups but love the picture. Hope that's ok
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A contest entry
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700 points, ended October 28, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Neat Prompt
with a picture perfect poem attending. Very nice.
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Excellent
what a terrific write. Such a beautiful creation. Best of luck in the contest -
Simply amazing and full of such wondrous words that depict the moment. The picture is awesome and it reflects your words so very well. Your rhyme and flow are just perfect and once again you have delighted me with your talent. The very best in the contest, my friend.
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Wow Gaylene, so very beautiful this is! When I first saw the pic I was expecting something maybe on the somber side..but you have spun sunshine all over this write. Gorgeous stuff!
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lovely
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This is just wonderful! Your poetry is so spiritual and expressed with such beauty...."in faith the spirit dances life." Wonderful imagery--makes me think of a prayer or a song.
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An impressive and beautiful poem. I love that you have written that no one will be left behind as long as they reach out. I can not select just one favorite line, but the last stanza is brilliant. You are a very gifted poet. I respect that you don't join groups, and greatly appreciate that you did write this moving and loving poem. Thank you for your beautiful entry.
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If I couldn't see the picture I could have imagined it after this fine write!
Wonderful as usual Gaylene !
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I so envy people who can rhyme coz I suck at it!! lol
This is so lovely and calming and I loved the picture, I could almost smell the sea My favourite part was the 2nd stanza. You create such beautiful imagery in all your poems 
Best of luck in the contest
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Excellent
A wonderful write for the picture. So very creative. Best of luck in the contest
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