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Materialistic Dreams

The whole world chases
after materialistic dreams,
running after people with
materialistic things,
working hard night and day,
trying to live the rich man's way.


There's something of much
more value inside you; it
watches and feels like you do.
Except, what it needs you can't
buy, no matter what you do
or how hard you try.


It's the words of old- what
good is the world if you lose
your soul? Once it's lost, it
disappears- no more little
voice talking in your ear.


Feelings become like something
once felt. The body no longer
recognizes itself. Then what you
need could be found in a store
but it will never fill the hole
where your soul was made for.


There's no real happiness with
material gain. What makes one
happy at first later turns into pain.
If your dreams are those of being
rich, think real hard before you
make the switch.


It's better to let dreams fall
behind in exchange for your
happiness, joy and peace
intime.be happy with who
you are, the soul of a living
burning star.

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  • ash003
    November 19
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    THAT WAS DEEP,DUDE...........
    GEART WORK....

  • myluvbabymosho
    November 1
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    I feel you in this poem, good work.


  • Quazeemodo6 silver member
    October 23
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    wow! your writng is always on point, keep up the great work, three dumbs up for you, I can surley relate.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 22

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    For me this is a lesson learned

    I did this, feeling a void and wanting to fill it

    your right it is temporal, it is like walking around the void for a moment, it doesn't last it cannot be filled by temporal

    but this experience is what brought me where I am

     

    now I know why?

     

    again I should say your writing is more profound and deeper...

    God bless you my friend...