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Bridge To Join Hearts(gold)

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Oh sturdy bridge to Camelot
in strength to join two worlds,
with promises along the way
where spirit's dream unfurls.

With tender lillies love's announced
roots slowly intertwine,
to float along in blissful thought
in sigh to love's design.

As breezes whisper through the trees
with secrets softly told,
for that which joins two hearts so fine
means more than precious gold.

Oh sturdy bridge to Camelot
regaled in sapphire hue,
you are instrumental suitor
so built for love's debut.



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  • Macsword
    October 25
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    Poet

    I have so much missed your pen. This is a lovely write. Bravo! Gold Worthy!


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    October 22

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    I love this pic and it's even more beautiful enhanced by your words. I can certainly see why it has a gold shiny next to it!! Tis most wonderful!


  • Katie Lazette
    October 22
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    Beautifully written. Congratulations in winning the gold.

    • Thank you Katie Lazette for your wonderful comments and applause They are much appreciated.
      Gaylene


  • GotLilt
    October 22
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    Congrats! I want to find that bridge!


  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    October 22
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    Wow, just excellent, I am feeling this one Gaylene, incredible job and thank you so much!


  • penman gold member
    October 22
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    Excellent

    Another fabulous write for the prompt. So very touching. Best of luck in the contest

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