Wispy cloud-white
streaked sparkling silver
swirled misty pinks
lavender dust
silks downward to earth
heaven blue
of the babiest shade
encircles my soul
with shimmering gold
healing light
radiantly soft
my spirit immersed
in its melody
enchantingly green
life’s color
star-kissed sky
and ocean moon
beams down through
twilight-misted hues
peaceful symphony
mystical song
inviting all to sing and dance
within its tranquil light
absorbing hope’s essence
the color
of harmony.
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I love the arrangement of the piece, this and this alone told me I didn't need to read you're poem to know what a creative and unique talent you posses. Congrats on getting to the next round
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!!
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Truly amazing write, the imagery is powerful here. I can picture it all just as you describe it. I agree with Kittie, this definately has such a peaceful feeling to it. It almost intrances you. "Wispy cloud-white
streaked sparkling silver
swirled misty pinks
lavender dust
silks downward to earth
heaven blue
of the babiest shade" Wonderful write
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Thank you so much for the very kind compliments. I am so glad you enjoyed it and felt peacefulness from it!
Amy
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Wow, its amazing,
it really gives off the feeling of tranquility and peace,
very realaxing.
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Thanks so much!
I appreciate your comments!
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Wow
This is absolutely beautiful. I'm glad you commented on my work,so that I could read yours. Wow.
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Aw.... thanks. Yours is beautiful too, I hope you do great in the contest! You really captured the magic of night in your write!
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