There's this clawing inside my brain
Making me itch for one more taste
Tempting me with memories
Of how good you feel
Running through my veins
And god you feel so good
Poisoning my soul
An evil so sweet
I can't escape
I don't want to escape
I know you're going to be the end
The final straw
But I just can't stop
I'm on my knees begging
For my final breath
God you feel so good
Suffocating my mind
Blinding out the light
So I can only focus on you
I only see you
I can never be free
You have your claws in so deep
Tearing at my heart
I can't live with you
I can't live without
But god you feel so good
Ripping through my insides
Making me feel alive
I just need a fix
I'm dying for you
My eyes wide open
As I'm fucking dying for you
I know you want it
I see you craving
Just try it once
Let it numb your pain
Just give in
You'll never go back again
Together we'll spiral into hell
Into the black abyss
The endless nothingness
Author notes
This is a really rough draft. I basically was up till 5 in the morning and wrote what i was thinking so please feel free to leave any and all suggestions.
I need a title and honest opinions please
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I think its better to leave it untitled 'cos those who know what you mean don't need a title-We've lived it.I could really relate to the line "There's this clawing in my brain itching for one more taste" I'm recovering (can we ever say recovered?)but that itch is still there and I think it always will be.Great write.Montey
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thank you montey.... and one day you will be recovered... I finally reached that point. Stay strong
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well penned Ma'am. this poem i think gives many an insight to what drugs can and oftentimes do to a person's mind body and soul. i thank you for writing this and opening my eyes to a different view of what it does.
David (EmeraldJewel -
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thank you again dave.... this one was written in the middle of one of my worst cravings so it really is a raw piece
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