on the cusp of a red moon rising
beyond the De-Mentor of ancient proselytizing;
I fly de fying the borders of mesmerizing ~~
Into post - diluvian Fields of de sensitizing.
un chartered kingdoms weigh heavily;
as saplings flounder in silent wander ~~
wondering why ignorance no longer finds comfort
inside the valley of malaise and ancient plunder.
let no Man put asunder the myopic blunders
of a world gone mad from Sychophant-silent-thunder;
lightning strikes! un holy mutter ~~ to fl-utter
blusterous winds...Trade...See to cacophonous calumniators.
fate of silence weights magnanimously at Hell's gate;
fore shadows satan's magnate stamp: "died in tes tate!"
Author notes
prompts:
~the weight of silence~
A contest entry
- silence. by nadine..
400 points, ended November 4, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i'm really amazed at how many ways people can spin this prompt.
probably simply because i'm 14 i had to look up just a couple words here and when i did i realized how amazing this poem is. i normally hate rhyme unless it's done well, and you did incredibly well with this.
"wondering why ignorance no longer finds comfort
inside the valley of malaise and ancient plunder."
-i just need to say that i love the abstract way in which you wrote these two lines
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Brilliant
Dark, twisting, and thought-provoking... I loved this.
The weight was tangible.
Very well done.
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Eternally applausable.
Thoughts' striking composition. A poetic-philosophic banquet.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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