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The unlocked doors

A soulless soul speaks...

...of ages of loneliness
of dreams unmet with reality
of footsteps waiting to cross in time
through the labyrinths of so called life
and of a life in search of its answers
that a simple soul cannot find...

O Lord Almighty!
i wait and i wait
for this barge to overflow
and sail into a river
of love, of life, of peace
and unlock all the doors in sight
which hold back the very soul in me
to go alone and find You...

O God! I know
You will show me how to...

Author notes

What is God?? Isn't He just the purest form of a human???
unlock all the doors that hold you to become pure...

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  • Ah..finding HIM is the onbly journey which makes us complete and worthy for the life..very true..and thank you so much for this poem..for my contest....