Arrow for arrow,
horror for horror,
terror for terror,
amour for amour,
treachery for treachery,
move for move,
identity for identity,
you do not even know,
smiles for smiles,
do I know you!
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do I know you!
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LOl this is awesome i love the words penned and your thought given.. well said hun.. Hugs always Angel♥
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nice write great job love the end!
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..a twist at the end ..very cool..i like that...
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Complex at first, then when you get to the final line, it all becomes clear... I loved it! Well penned.
Lillie
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Nice build-up for the last 3 lines. Enjoyable read. I think it could be expanded some to give a more complete picture. Just MHO. I like it
Sharon
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This is a good poem and has something in it that everyone should ask themselves! I thought that it might have to much of the repeat at first but you worked it out to make it work and sound great.
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Daughter of night
i really like this poem nice job -
Ummm I was thinking of dark corners, dim lit lights, and shadows...nice flow
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very cool poem! =}
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So much is said
and I ponder on these thoughts of yours
those smiles for smiles, a free exchange, and one many long to see
for the lonely and the sad..
beautiful
Blessings to you
Julie
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great poem
so amazing
keep going ^^
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Games.
The best defense is to know your enemy. This is an interesting write.
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hmmm... I don't get it
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well
blue in any human game of wits...these steps take place...you know....Debono.....games me and you play!
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