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She is

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She...

Is the woman of my life

Winter, Spring

And Summer time

The wind that cools

 my burning flesh

The soft sweet breeze

That combes my hair

The rain that falls upon my face

Becoming tears of despair

Longing to be with her

She... is the Autumn in my heart

That scatters leafs upon the ground

The grey sky that looks so sad

But hopes, some day..

Spring, will come once more

She ...is the dream, I dreamed before

So many times but did`nt know

She`d be for real

To fill my life with so much love

A love that aches but` so sweet

A love that kills

A love that thrills me

Deeply.

  

 

 

 

 

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Dedication to my only love
Judy

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  • Ani Grace
    November 9

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    Stunning and awe-inspiring. A Your Muse is truly beautiful, but what she brings out in you, Poet, is breathtaking.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 3

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    for you speak of love in your heart the way the river flows in the stream of life to carry this passage of time lived upon the souls delight .. a stunning pen for one you love always Hugs Angel♥


  • Vhoori
    October 28

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    This is completely beautiful. Something from the very heart of true love. It captivates the essence of real affection and care for a woman. Good job, and I bet she loves it.


    Vhoori


  • lovlilmystery
    October 22

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    Beautiful, amazingly beautiful. I can't find words, that would truly do justice for this piece. You have captured the true essence, of what it is like to be in love. I wish, to have this one day. To find someone, I could write beautiful poetry for, like you do, for Judy. Love can be quite beautiful and I can see it in this piece. Thank you, for sharing. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    October 22

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    My brother may love be with you , for
    Your words speak to the beauty and passion of love
    which you have penned from the heart

    Blessed be



  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 22

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    the poem could not be more beautiful in a sad way, I sugest you put a better photo or use a plain background

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