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Zap those eyelashes for once

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Your eyes hold the magic
that conjures
allures
disarms
captures
and
imprisons.


time

that


you


released

me!

zap those eyelashes

for once

please!

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  • Green Stars
    October 22

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    Enchanting

    You tell of being caught in the web of a lover's gorgeous eyes..her hold on you and your desire to be set free or not set free..a love story ....


  • light to a dreamer gold member
    October 22
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    This poem shows how much someone can love but be hurt all at the same time you show so much feeling in your poems I like that


  • Night Rose
    October 22
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    DAughter of night

    AWW how cute, i think this poem to could be used or mean how you feel for this girl


  • klassy lassy
    October 22

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    Aye, Aye, Aye. LOL... I love the language of eyes. Wish I had eyelashes to stir up a little alchemy and bewitchment. What stories they tell! Loved this one!


  • My Souls Reflection gold member
    October 22

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    Perfect to describe the way I feel right now!

    Some people you meet in life just affect you this way...there is no running, there is no hiding, there is no release...ever!

    Annie

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